Pros and cons are sown below. Check out my vid (the game is the second there):
Advantages:
1. I like the style so much! This whole noir theme is awesome. Love it.
2. The plot is unexpectable. It is thrilling and the realization of what you did is powerful. I think that was done perfectly.
3. I love the pacing. First the game creates questions then tension and at the end a strong twist. Such a strong experience for such a short game.
Disadvantages:
1. Maybe a bit more spooks would be nice. I mean some sounds here and there, more tension at the forest. Maybe you could try adding a feeling of being watches. Maybe the game would benefit from it.
2. The notes at the wall are strange. Like he wanted to remember all of it so hard that he wrote it and put at the wall to watch every time he's descending. Strange. Maybe subtitles would be better or even some voice acting if that is possible for you to do during quarantine.
Overall:
Had lots of fun playing the game! I think it deserves the best rating and I can't wait for next chapters of stories from the grave) When will they be out?
Hope my feedback was useful!