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So... I tried your game and... I want to say something.

I know that it's only early alpha for test, yeah, but... I think that 5 minutes of gameplay is too short even for demo alpha version (played in alpha 0.04). That's only the mini-prologue scene, but I was really "surprised" when the game ended. I don't even to understand what happened.

But if to close the eyes on that... And look into bright and nice future...

I see an awful English. Seriously, it isn't my first language, and I already see many mistakes... That's not good to present product on Patreon with such a quality. I think that you don't even edit the text :( Examples...

"Aww... I thristy"

"Are you oke ?,you look not good."

"W-what wrong ?,you don't like a mineral water ?."

"Ow.. God... ,I be like alive again"

"Nothing,bay the way,take this,you keep thristy right."

"Can I asking somethink ?."

"His gone,but that okey,before is a good talking."

And so many... Almost every phrase has a mistakes in punctuation and spelling. I don't even know what to think... Guys, please, say that you're tried... Agh... Mmmhh... :(

I really want to see more gay furry VN in this world in English... It seems like I overestimated my expectations... Ugh... Just a bit.

Good luck anyway. Hope that that game will improve for the better. Thanks.

Thank you for your comment, indeed still a lot of things we need to fix, so forgive us for the mistakes that we made, but we will continue with this project and repair all mistakes in future update, sorry for all uncomfortable and thanks.

- NNaosuke Team