Really enjoyed the demo! Some good art and some GREAT bold colour choices. Each bit of text was interesting enough in itself that it made me want to read more! I really like (and most importantly am interested) the world. I said a little "ooo" out loud to nobody when I saw a giant robot head in the distance on one of the screens.
The music was also very calming and moody which is good for reading but I do hope there's a lot more musical variation in the final release. I also hope a mobile version of this eventually gets released because its definitely my preferred format for menu based adventure games like this. Although you have 'minigames' listed as a future feature so I guess it could also depend on whether they would translate to tablet.
I'm hyped and am now following on tumblr.
PS. When leaving the video shop it says "go outise" instead of go outside