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1. Did you enjoy it overall?

Yes! I am so excited for the following chapters!

2. What was your favorite part?

The beginning when Aldrich kept on surprising me with ridiculous nicknames.

Although beating Lucy and Santana came in as a close second. :D

3. There are a lot of comedic moments, but was the drama included in a way that was able to put the comedy aside, or did it just seem an odd jump from comedy?

The transitions were fine, realistic in my opinion.


4. Who is your favorite character?

Aldrich! He is so optimistic and easygoing yet clever when it comes to battling and manners.

5. Who did you start to romance? Did you find it difficult romancing the person you wanted?

I am attempting to get Aldrich but I feel like I am scoring higher with Natalia based on how much our relationship has been mentioned by others. I think both are pretty easy to romance though.

Final Notes: I absolutely love your soundtrack! The music never fails to get me pumped up for the game play.

Oh my god, seeing you say you liked the soundtrack made me so happy ;u; I'm not a composer and really it was just me fiddling around in GarageBand trying to find something that worked... thank you so much!

I'm glad you liked Aldrich! In the demo, everyone mentioned that Natalia seemed very difficult to get closer to, but I think I've gotten a good balance between both romances. Of course, you can't have your cake and eat it to, so if Aldrich starts drawing away from you, that might be an indicator that you're on Natalia's path!

Thank you for playing, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

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Holy cow! That was "messing around in GarageBand"?! DANG! Absolutely loved the story and soundtrack, both had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. I did notice a few issues just in spelling and using the incorrect word tense, but very easy to overlook. If you don't have someone already proofreading the game script, I'd be ecstatic to offer my help. I've only recently started with renpy, but I'm learning the interface quickly, and the engine is well designed to be receptive to fast changes.

Getting back to gushing, however...
ASHFJSKLAOMFLADGMA SO GOOD. The writing is intense and really draws the reader in, the music sets the scene perfectly, the interactions between characters are smooth and enjoyable, the dialouge choices are clear and provide interesting differences. Pardon the run-on sentences, but I just - gah! - this game is sooo good. I was cracking up a few times at the comedy gold in some of these scenes. Looking forward to more.

Nooo you're gonna make me cry ; ; Thank you so much for your kind comments, they really made my day. I'd love to know what parts you laughed at! I do have some people who help me test, but not anyone who really seriously goes through and proofreads. For chapter 3 and 4 though, I have someone else writing, so that should help narrow down the errors with us both checking it out. But thank you though, I'm not gonna turn down extra help if you're up for it!

I really liked the soundtrack too. My favorite is the battle theme music during duels. It reminds me of a Pokemon gym battle for some reason but I love it.

Haha wow, I love the pokemon music so I'm honored you think so! xD