Hey Kale, thank you very much for the feedback. I really need to test that and reference it with a piano. But you might be right. Especially Zwiebel was somewhat of an happy accident. I never really intended it to modulate in the way it does now. I kind of was inspired by your baroque take and thought it might be fitting for a witch and since I planned to use a string quartet in an other song, which is also pretty baroque.
You are also right on the little places in general. I should have weaved the parts better into each other and make them flow better. But honestly that would have taken me a lot more time ^^*. I really need to get my balance right with a full time job that feel sometimes just draining and my other hobbies. So I’m kind of happy where I even got in this short time frame. But you’re right, it should have gotten more attention and care in those parts.