Ok. Nevermind. I missed the bottle of "pain" pills.
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Hi, friend! I am very happy that you liked my game and decided to write a comment. It means a lot to me and I appreciate it highly. It would be very nice to give more feedback and something like short list the positives and negatives of the game.
For example, whether you like the organization and the transitions in the second part or the third part is better and etc. Did you see the improvements in renders/better English translation in Day 3 and etc.
Every opinion - negatively or positively helps me to make every new update better. Thank you for your support!
To bee honest, I've played a few 100 games. At Least 50% have ATROCIOUS, near incomprehensible English writing. Sometimes I just skip the writing and watch the scenes. Your writing for the 1st part..... It seemed as though you were learning to speak English and had 1 day of instruction, when you needed a couple of months. After that, I kind of ignored the bad English and substituted the proper words when I understood your intent, then tried to Forget the improper. I can't say if your English improved from 1-3 or not. I guess you tried to add more motion and realism to the characters as they walked and moved. Unfortunately it seems kind of like a 10 year old learning new technology with almost no foreknowledge. It is a Little better than staring at pictures. It seems you're Trying to offer us Entertainment. Mostly I'm focused on the FUN you can have with your Mother and Aunt. In part 2 when you "give a 1st, 2nd and 3rd chance to "make the right choice" that's fucking annoying. This game is Incest, Rape and Blackmail, yet we're forced NOT to Rape until the "right" time? That's illogical. Rape itself isn't Right. Therefore there's no Right time.
Instead of Blocking Rape, you should include more of it. "Now isn't the right time for Rape, I'll give you another chance to make the right decision, you can Rape later"...... Either don't Block Rape, or don't Include that option during that scene. Offering Rape chance but saying "not now you can later" is bullshit. The graphics quality is decent. It Does seem you're trying to Improve. Good amount of content per Update. Hopefully with .4, .09, .22 release and further (however long you plan for this to be) your English will be Vastly improved or damn near Perfect.