I love the idea of the game/musical. I backed the game and am really eager to get my hands on it.
I feel that the Defeat/Victory is confusing, that means there is an ideal path to "win", but if so you have to choose to win or to follow what you want your character to say. That's not really how I see a story driven game. I really hope you'll stay away of win/defeat system and just follow different path depending on what your choices are.
The points also feels given at random and you don't know what choices affect the points and how.
Hopefully it's just because you wanted to show the choice system and that it's just an early demo.
Keep up the good work ;)