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the short story of a girl who experience something strange happened to her
Submitted by aedelish with 2 days, 19 hours before the deadline

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short VN about a girl who experience something strange happened to her

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Developer

no problem at all///

thank you^^
now I write first chapter of it, hope it will be good~~

Sorry, I guessed wrong then :(

Yuu did seem a bit shady. :P Good luck with further development of the game, I hope you can make it the way you want it to be!

Developer

thank you//
err.. I'm sure I'm not japanese;;;

ah, yes, I've check it
it's scene when first time meet jorogumo, thank you for point it;;;
I'll make it note on it.
yes, there's mysteries still unexplained and I plan to write it on Full Game, especially about "Yuu" Yume's friend;;;;
still on my freelance job now, so for a while I can't touch this project yet;;; T.T

No problem, your English isn't bad at all. Are you from Japan?

I understood that memory scene being relived by Yume, but the scenes where the character name seemed to be incorrect were others. I can't remember 100%, but I think the first time she meets the spider woman in human form was one of them!

Don't worry, the start of the Visual Novel said it was a horror story and I played it anyway because I was interested. I think the game is clear enough about what kind of theme it has, that one scene with Hanako just fazed me a bit!

Developer

Hello cubehero,
Thanks for playing my VN :)
I admit the story kinda rush and I've missed some point.
and for misplaced name, I think it refer to Hanako's background story scene. I did it on purpose. place yume's name in hanako's point of view.
ah...yeah;;;, forgive me  not mention this story kinda have tragic treat, actually I need some impact on my story, and this thing only I have to do ^^;;;

Thank you^^
ah, forgive me for my weird grammar
English isn't my first language, so please excuse my mistake;;;

I liked the art, Bozu had some funny faces especially, but the other characters were nicely drawn as well. The CGs were pretty good, too. The story was also kind of interesting, but I had a bit of a hard time following it in some scenes. This was partly because you seem to have forgot to set the character name field correctly on some dialogues? (sometimes there's even dialogue text in the name box) Aside from that my biggest complaint is probably Hanako's memory scene being so brutal compared to everything else, but then I'm not a big fan of horror myself ;;

Overall good work with the game!