I liked having all the text on one page. It made it feel like a story you were reading from start to finish.
The question then becomes, though, does it really need to be a "game" if all you do is read it...
The trope thing is a great comedy source here, and done very well, though it ranged from "funny" to "eyebrow-raising" to "disturbing" (like the Foe Yay thing). My main complaint would be having all the text on one page. Some grammar stuff, too, but it didn't really take too much away from the story. Nice work.
(btw, I'm also in the Twiny Jam. My game is HCF. Check it out?)
I see what you did there.
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