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A jam submission

How To Survive Religious TraumaView game page

a detailed religion survival guide.
Submitted by Naomi Norbez (call me Bez) (@NaomiNorbez) — 12 days, 12 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Open Voting#103.1303.500

Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Content warnings
Trauma, Christianity

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Jam HostSubmitted

This was very interesting. I'm not the target audience, but I can see how it would be rough to make this shift. It read as quite heartfelt.

The dialogue presented is relevant to the point you're discussing, and very succinct. This is actually something some writers struggle with - linking the assertion well to the actual argument - so good job pulling it off.

Developer

Thank you for the compliments, and for reading!  I appreciate it. C:

Submitted

It's easy to see how important this guide would be for people who would need it (though it seems irrelevant to my own background).

It is a bit a shame that the colour scheme chosen can make it a bit hard to read. It was also a bit difficult to find the link for the next page since the colour of the text and of the link is really close to one another. I think if it had a bit more contrast, it would be nicer.

Still, thanks for putting out something that could help people.

Developer

Thanks for reading! & that's good to know.  Maybe I can add a shadow to the text to make it more readable?

Submitted

It could be maybe better to keep the background completely brown and keep the same text colour, that would bring enough contrast to it. And for the links, have the colour being less light/white :)

Developer

I see. So make the link color darker?

Submitted

yes!

Submitted (1 edit)

I'd recommend a fixed font-size like 20px or so.
250% just made the whole text very hard to read.

Other than that, I thought the text was well written, I've never really been into any religion but I can see how the guide could help those that were.

Developer

Oh, does it look different in your browser?  Can I have a screenshot?

Submitted

Sure, here:

Developer

I actually intended the font to be large for this one; I didn't want to the font to be too small.  Glad you liked the text!