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A jam submission

Puff of SmokeView game page

Submitted by Rapscallionrobby — 1 day, 17 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
People's Choice#82.7773.000

Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

This story went in a different direction than I expected. I loved how the lore unfolded through subtle hints in the dialogue with all the villagers. I also noticed that Norgrim spoke to himself ("I miss her so much," etc) but didn't reply to the people - not sure if that was intentional or not but I thought it was a neat bit of characterization for this sad, lonely old man. You told a great story and you told it wonderfully. It was very linear but still lets the player explore at their own pace & choose how much to interact on their way to the ending. Beautiful job mapping, great music and sound design. The only thing I even found to nitpick is there's a door opening sound effect when entering the mouth of the cave - that's it. <3 (Also, definitely deserves the saddest game award. ;) )

Submitted

Short and sweet, a brief little story with an unexpected ending.
I didn't understand who I was till the end.  well done.

Submitted(+1)

Uhhh was not expecting that ending, lol

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Thanks for the submission, Rapscallionrobby!