This is great. Very impactful writing and very condensed delivery.

Currently the only downside is that the description and cover don't do it justice. I don't have any good suggestions, but I think if you can better show what this is it will reach a broader audience.

Very well written. I included it in my Spring Cleaning Twine Jam compilation video series, if you’d like to take a look. :)

Thank you for our submission! What I liked the most about this game was the world building - Not only did I get to know the main character very well, I was also familiarised with the world that he lives in and his relationships with other characters (Madhava is so sweet!!).  World-building in such a small game is always difficult and I'm impressed with how vivid a world you managed to paint. 

The UI is quite polished and straightforward to use. In terms of game mechanics, the insanity points system was interesting, but it felt like largely more of a trial-and-error process rather than something I could reason out? I'm not sure if that was intended, or if I am just a little emotionally dense. Regardless, I enjoyed seeing most of the game while trying to achieve a "perfect run".  The ending also felt a little anti-climatic/there isn't much resolution, but that's mostly just personal feelings, and I also understand that it may be intended. 

I enjoyed playing through this a lot, and your writing is very enjoyable to read. I'm interested to know more about Morrez and his story!