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A jam submission

Recalcitrants of Desert SandsView game page

Having a price on your head isn't pretty, but when it comes from your own family it pierces your heart.
Submitted by OceanaAchroite — 11 hours, 21 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Sound Effects#1691.8713.500
Music#1741.8713.500
Voice Acting#1830.8021.500
Game Graphic & Logo Design#1851.8713.500
Overall#1891.6043.000
Log Line#1921.6043.000
Game Page Design#1921.3362.500
Character Designs#1931.6043.000
User Interface Design#2021.0692.000
Accessibility#2031.0692.000
Story#2060.8021.500
Halloween Themed#2100.5351.000

Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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I love all the backgrounds and character sprites that are in this. They're painted wonderfully. Millie has such great aesthetic. The world building and the mentioned power have me intrigued. The dialogue between Millie and Rosalline was pretty funny as well.

If you decide to update this I suggest changing the background colour of the UI to be a dark brown to match your main menu. Currently with the white it is incredibly hard to read all the yellow text that appears in the VN. 

Also there are a fair bit of typos I found that I'll list here so you can quickly fix them if you so wish.

  • "Becuase"-> "Because"
  •  "theives" -> "thieves"
  • "busicuts" -> "biscuits"
  •  "voulenteer" -> "volunteer"
  •  "sarm" - "swarm"?
  • "leder" -> "leader" or "elder"?
  •  "thier"-> "their"
Developer (1 edit) (+1)

Ello! Thanks so much for the feedback! I very greatly appreciate it! This being my first time doing this I do value all the feedback I can get. I'll keep this in mind if I get time to fix this stuff. Thanks again!

Also, I'm glad Millie stood out. I adore her too. I felt the sugar rush as I made her character, lol.