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A jam submission

The Wrong EvelynView game page

so like...eh heh heh...where's the RIGHT one?
Submitted by CheddarTeeth — 1 hour, 50 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Overall#54.8464.846
Story#104.7694.769
Music#124.6154.615
Game Page Design#214.6154.615
Log Line#224.4624.462
User Interface Design#274.5384.538
Sound Effects#354.1544.154
Accessibility#404.3084.308
Game Graphic & Logo Design#554.5384.538
Character Designs#644.5384.538
Halloween Themed#863.7693.769
Voice Acting#912.2312.231

Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

As an otaku, I love the anime and game reference! I recognized many from the display and the title made me giggle. Love the story and the jokes. And the characters really expressive! Love it so much!

Developer

THANKS :D

Submitted(+1)

"It turns out relationships aren't like a GAME at all!"

Great art style. That hologram animations looked really cool. Loved the backgrounds and reading all the game titles. The parents going HAM was so funny. I love that the game leans heavily into the cringe of being socially awkward while never being creepy but in fact surprisingly wholesome.

I actually called myself Karl on my first play trough which cause some funny confusion. I spend a few minutes thinking I had been cloned by another projections thing. :)

Thank you for making this game.

Developer

Thank YOU for enjoying it :D 

And I can't believe I never thought about what would happen if someone named themselves Karl...whoopsies...

Submitted(+1)

I really enjoyed your game! The pacing and humor is well done. The only thing I missed was the skip button so I could get to all the endings faster. Great game!

Developer

Ah yea looking back I DO agree I shouldn't have taken out some of the basic features O_O but thanks for enjoying the game!

Submitted(+1)

This had me smiling the whole time! The characters are a lot of fun, the protagonist is adorably awkward. And the art is so charming! I loved all the silly jokes in the background (still grinning just thinking about a "Nail File Man"). Some really catchy tunes as well!

(+1)

This game was very fun and the humor is top tier. I loved the anime and video game references, and the different color palettes and unique art style was awesome! I highly recommend anyone to play this game. 

Submitted(+1)

This was a fun time! I adore the visuals you used for this VN - they're super cute and expressive. I'm impressed you managed to create so many dynamic scenes in such a short period of time - and the glitch effects with the Virtual Evelyn are fantastic too.

The story made me smile a lot as well: I was pleasantly surprised with how sweet the good ending was, and the sillier endings made me laugh. Also, an anime and games fan, the references you made throughout made me chuckle (shoutout to Buzzerk and Within Our General Vicinity in particular). 

Well done on the whole!

Developer(+1)

Thanks so much for the nice review :D

Within Our General Vicinity gotta be one of my own personal favorites as well ,':)

(+1)

Great art, I really liked the colour palettes. And the funny storytelling that appeared was really what kept me entertained throughout the game. The effects that appeared in the later parts of the game were very shocking and added a lot of great taste to the game.  A really good dish all in all!

(+2)

I loved this game, it was so much fun. The first time I played this style of game, and I enjoyed it so much. I highly recommend this game!