Love a choose your own adventure game, and I skimmed through the book to get an idea of the mechanics while trying to avoid spoiling anything for myself. I like the weird symbols added to the sheet and other pop up mechanics that keep you moving along. Only thing I think I would change is wording on the timer to indicate it is for the mechanics later in the game as I felt a little confused starting off if I was supposed to have set a time limit, or something. Maybe just changing it to a 1 minute hourglass or something would clarify.

As I have time I’ll try to get through a play through and provide more feedback.