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axoona is creating stuff. she loves jams 🍯 and surreal rabbit holes🐇🕳️
Artist Statement, about your piece
I've been hyped by the jam since the start but I've been occupied by other stuff in june and then completely tired in july, I've been constantly postponing work on this.
We had a discussion sunday with other creator's at PangPang club about the care / productivity relationship in creative work. And in the end I concluded that I shouldn't torment myself about submitting something if my body tells me otherwise.
The next day I wrote down all the thoughts I had in my head about it and the text of this work was born with a desire to implement it in Twine for the jam.
What do you need from us, when giving feedback on your piece?
the first question would be: is this a poem? ;)
I'll gladly take any feedback you'd like to give me.
But if you have to priortize, I'm most interested in feedback regarding my writing and the use of interactivity to convey the message
Questions, Comments, Concerns?
I've read half of your poetry zines, and the examples you've given. I really like the idea. and I wish I could be more present on the discord during the jam. I enjoyed reading the discussions and I'm sure I could learn even more if I was actively present and my work would surely benefit from this.
We are experimenting different formats in Pang (again in relation to care/productivity) and the hypothesis we're testing right now are shorter jams but where those that want to participate are present so we can have live discussions. and either we're working on something during the time or those that are occupied, tired just don't participate or don't commit to anything.
I don't know if this is adapted to this type of work, but as there is live feedback involved, it could mean lesser time window when participants are engaged in jam so more dynamics on the server and in the discussions. on the other hand long jams give the opportunity for everyone to submit...
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