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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Game Master Usability | #95 | 2.913 | 3.026 |
Ranked from 38 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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it’s useable. Not super original but it would run fine. Extra point for hand drawn map.
"The Ashen Boots of the Keeper. 3/day the wearer may step into a large tree and out of another within close. "
Is the range on this item supposed to be near, or maybe far? Because, isn't "close range" basically like 5 feet?
It's a good start, the formatting and layout could use a bit more work to really bring it up so it looks and feels "official". The map is really where more work needs to be invested however.
Thanks for the feedback. This was written in an effort to avoid costs. I'm down for investing the $$$ into the work, but since this was my first ever attempt at publishing, I wanted to see where I stood, so to speak. If things look promising, I'll be going all in!
Thanks again!
Great writing! I'd love to see more art and layout work. I know these things take time and sometimes money but it really helps GMs find information quickly. As for the mapping stuff, Dungeon Scrawl is great. I do know that if you want to sell your maps as part of an Adventure, you have to pay for a license.
Solid. For sure something I'd run with my group.
Thanks! I’d love to hear how it goes. If you wait to run it until after the Jam, I’m going to upload the entire module. I cut it down to just the dungeon to meet the Jam’s page requirements.
I like the dungeon. Question: Do you have a scanner?
All of my images are hand drawn, then scanned and doctored with GIMP. That's how I remove the lines on the graph paper of my maps. Usually just a matter of making it greyscale, then increasing the contrast.
Unsolicited advice, but I hope it's well received and beneficial.
Thanks for that advice. I was going to use Dungeon Scrawl for the map eventually, as the adventure has a few more pages that I am going to add back in later. I reduced it for the Jam. I’ll try the scanner/GIMP procedure since it’s a free option. Thanks again!