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A jam submission

Crocodile Barbarian - Rising StarView project page

Character Art entry for the Sumo Digital Rising Star challenge.
Submitted by distinctcorvid — 5 minutes, 32 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Creative#263.2503.250
Presentation#292.7502.750
Documentation#313.0003.000
Overall#342.8502.850
Technical#372.5002.500
Research + Development#372.7502.750

Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • A very nice character produced following typical industry standard pipelines. I feel in the end your sculpts worked very well, the texturing could use a little more practise, as the sculpt, but your doing very well with them regardless and it holds its own anyway. Looking at the retopo it seemed overly dense, but still the loops were in the right place. I think your work has a solid foundation that requires a few more characters of practise to really polish your craft. Keep it up!
  • Hi Brittany, nice job getting your entry in before the deadline. The character came out nice, but I have a few points to help improve the final result. In the concepts you referenced, all of the crocs had armor, cloth, leather, etc. It would have been nice to see some material breakup on the character by adding in these kind of elements, as the final result is just a body. Secondly, add a small environment around your character, it helps sell the character and the world he inhabits. Also, a black background really does not do any favors for presentation, switch it out to something lighter, even adding in some smokey effects and swirls is better than flat black.

Challenge Tier

Sumo Digital Rising Star

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