It's great to see the continuing tradition of visual novels play a major presence in jams. I think this is a unique idea - to have a series of horror vignettes means a lot more variety and also more shorter, punchy and impressionable stories. I liked how the two stories were tonally different, one creepy and the other scary. They also harnessed Ren'Py in a very effective way and made the most of the platform. I also think the hand-drawn assets were quite cutely-done and would love to see more! 

I think from a writing perspective the only feedback is that there could be more potential to flesh out (pun intended) the narrative after the twists in the story. I would have loved to know what the deal with the toilet monster was, or the story behind getting preserved alive. But regardless these are very dark and inventive stories and I can't wait to see what comes of the next ones you make!

Thanks for submitting Horror Clip to the SCREAM LITE jam! 

Nice game, I like the arts ..

Wow, I loved the art of this game, and the way you conveyed the story through the text. The Garden felt amazing to play - and the jumpscare in the Toilet was very very fun!

As far as feedback, I'd love to have mor music in the stories, to elevate the atmosphere.
Anyway, great job you guys! And congratulations on your studio's anniversary!

PS: If you have the time, go check my game, The Suicide of Mr. Tanaka! Hope you enjoy.