Congratulations on your win in Story!

I thought the story was really cool. Movement was a bit weird but it didn't hinder the experience too much. I thought this was really really good :)

Now I know what it would be like to go insane. Thanks! (Also the game was very good too!)

Great game! Movement was kind of clunky but the art style and sound were amazing!

Such melancholy! This was a good little narrative. I appreciate the simplicity and visual changes as the story progresses.

nice story, i could kinda see the way it was going straight away, i think it would have been more impactful twist if you didnt build it up so much and made it seem like someone or something else was the one behind everything. movement was hard to control felt like a grid base movement which felt weird when you can move the camera freely in any direction. nice game though story was good for what it was

The graphic style is very well done and the story is AMAZING! Great game, my only point is that the movement is a little disconnected from the camera, but other than that the game was an awesome experience.

The story and writing were good and I liked the visual style. Pixelated horror was always a good way to make some parts even more scarrier.  Also I was getting some Max Payne vibes during the game.

I liked the aesthetics, reminded me of those popular pixelated horror games like imscared. The movement was a little bit "stiff" but I feel like that's the only complaint I have good job

I loved the artstyle and the way the story is communicated. 

This is a great game. I have to say, the writing in this game is really well done, and I enjoyed it a lot. also the point you walk in the bathroom and suddenly everything looks off, is so well executed. It makes the player feel really unease. I get that reading games are not for everyone (I like them though), But I would really recomend this to anyone

Amazing game. Keep it up♥

It was quite an interesting story, mostly I don’t have the patience to read, but this time I didn’t skip the dialogues and that’s good because it was the whole point of the game ;) Good work.

Love the aesthetics!  Good work on the story!

This is the aesthetic I crave haha. Really nice environment and the way it changed throughout was always interesting. "Knocking at the door" is a great horror device and it's used well here. The story was pretty interesting (even if the poetry bits weren't my thing) and overall this was a neat experience! Glad to have played it.

Not much in terms of gameplay, but the story is great. loved the twist at the end.

really well done on the story, loved the music

The story seemed a little reliant on the dialogue in having to explain things, but it would probably take way more time to show and not tell everything. Impressive for having been made in a week. The low poly art made me feel lost but in a good way. I like the changes that happen to the house in the second part of the game, like the picture on the fridge and the blood in the bathtub. The music was super creepy, in a good way of course. The controls weren't that bad but interacting with things was challenging. Overall a good experience, just needs a little refinement.

I really think some ambient sound would have added a lot to the game's atmosphere and creepiness. The art will simple is still pretty neat. The story was neat but there was maybe a bit much to read at times. I'm not sure if you made this in your own game engine, if you did major congrats if you didn't, maybe some lighting next time? Also, the movement was really jank.

Overall, pretty cool and short experience.

I loved the detail of the text waving for the poetry and shaking for the ghosts. Good work!