What a whimsical, romantic little story! c: I loved the atmosphere you created, it actually felt like I was at a ball. The wonderful piano music in the background and such great attention to art really sold it! (the garden background is my favorite, it looks so good!)

The special scenes took my breath away, they are so well drawn!

As for the story, I think you've got something interesting cooking there :) It did feel a little rushed in terms of romance. It did not feel believable that a vampire that's been around for so long would fall in love with someone they spoke to for such a short amount of time. The part that was hard to believe was how it left such a lasting impression on the vampire even though nothing that special happened between the two (but the monologue that resulted from that was really well done!) Your writing is absolutely lovely outside of that, it was such a pleasure to read.

I really appreciated how you modified standard renpy elements like menu, dialogue box, etc. Good attention to detail there! c: It makes your game stand out from other renpy games as a result. 

Overall, thank you for this wonderful story 💕 I wish you all the best in future creative endeavors!