So, this game is a really nice concept, but obviously it's in very early stages. I always love an interactive story with multiple endings, and this one is pretty well written across the board. The text is nice, a base font, not too hard to read, could maybe use for a font that's a tad more stylish and earie, however, due to the nature of the ratings, I can't really rate the art very high just based on a readable font. Very creative, I don't see many indie games on here go the multiple story paths rout. I do have concerns about this game becoming more in the future, as, with just how much story and customization is here, it may be a bit difficult to keep track and properly implement it all should you begin to add actual gameplay, you may have to sacrifice a tad bit of story. However, as simply an interactive click based story, it's pretty good. To avoid this I may suggest the visual novel approach, though from the looks of things, you probably already have that planned to some degree. But having visuals like backgrounds and sprites, maybe some animations if you're able to dredge up some funding somehow, would due this game wonders. I really enjoy horror visual novels and this story would really work well in that genre. May revisit this game at a later date.