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- A short but sweet little VN with a surprise double-twist to it. I appreciated the characterization and lore being setup in this, even if the content presented would have been much better if it had started sooner in the two characters' relationship. I would like to see an expanded version of the story that begins before Saren and our MC got to know each other so well, allowing us to get to know the characters better.
- 9th Place Score: (59/150)
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Short game but a nice wholesome story. Was a nice experience. Seems like a the game accomplished everything it set out to do which is nice for a jam game. I felt like it hung on certain images a bit long so more CG would’ve been a nice addition. Also I feel like some of the characters could have been fleshed out a bit more as well. Overall, a wholesome visual story.
thank you. I'm still trying some new things with regards to sprites, but I'm glad to hear you liked it XD
Not a bad base at all, though I'd suggest going over the text again. I noticed a number of typos and incorrect/missing punctuation.
This is by no means a final judgement - you can still update and change things around before the deadline, I'm just giving feedback to possible inprovements.
thanks for the feedback, I'll go over it again and see what I can do XD