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Scrap Seas Demo's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Unique Selling Point | #3 | 3.857 | 3.857 |
| Clarity | #4 | 3.786 | 3.786 |
| Engagement | #4 | 3.857 | 3.857 |
| Overall Pitch Quality | #11 | 3.571 | 3.571 |
Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- Looks great! Definitely a stand out entry. Love the comic book world style, the trailer is good and the premise is unique! Suggestions: -- Tweet suggestion pasted below (as Realms Games). You have some more words so might be worth using it. (Although your video is great so shorter may be better. Try A/B testing to see which one gets more link clicks.) -- Use Twitter Ad Cards to embed your Demo Link in your video so when people click they go straight to your page. Jump in our Discord and ask your team if you don't know how. -- Call to Action should go to your demo not your Press Kit. -- Your Press Kit page should have the meat of the information presented neatly on the page. Your link should be for bulky files like video, high-res screenshots, etc -- Recommend running through the https://feepresskit.com/ tool and updating your page.
- It's Twisted Metal but on the seas and I like that! The whimsical pop-up text is fun and so does the combat. Although I personally thought the combat was a little hard to follow.
- Excellent use of gifs The cover banner on itch page is great Tweet needs more hashtags Very unique art style
- Feedback submitted as Indie Legion.
PitchYaPitch Tweet
https://twitter.com/funfreighter/status/1451747159955681283?s=21
Press Kit Link (DevLog Update)
https://www.funfreightergames.com/copy-of-home
Itch.io Game URL (DevLog Update)
https://fun-freighter-games.itch.io/scrap-seas
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Unique concept with a clear artistic style. I like this pairing. The tweet could include another hook or two since you've been concise up to this point. I went to check the presskit and saw it was only a downloadable file. I'd recommend creating a page to embed the resources in, with a download link on that page.
Thank you for sharing!
Looks great! Definitely a stand out entry. Love the comic book world style, the trailer is good and the premise is unique!
Suggestions:
-- Tweet suggestion pasted below (as Realms Games). You have some more words so might be worth using it. (Although your video is great so shorter may be better. Try A/B testing to see which one gets more link clicks.)
-- Use Twitter Ad Cards to embed your Demo Link in your video so when people click they go straight to your page. Jump in our Discord and ask your team if you don't know how.
-- Call to Action should go to your demo not your Press Kit.
-- Your Press Kit page should have the meat of the information presented neatly on the page. Your link should be for bulky files like video, high-res screenshots, etc
-- Recommend running through the https://feepresskit.com/ tool and updating your page.
Feedback submitted as Indie Legion.
Suggested Tweet Edit
#ScrapSeas is a 3D Vehicle 3rd-Person Shooter #Roguelike. Build and pilot your crazy ship through a lively comic book world and fight your way to glorious treasure!
Warning: If you DIE, you'll die forever
Play the Halloween Demo Today!
https://fun-freighter-games.itch.io/scrap-seas
#PitchYaPitch
Your game is very memorable, and you communicate the different aspects of the game well through your trailer without overcomplicating things. Good work!
A couple things:
- You might want to link your demo in your tweet instead of your press kit so people can download/wishlist your game more easily
- It takes a lot of effort to download and unzip your press kit, which might keep people from looking at it. You might want to host it on somewhere like Google Drive or something like that
Your tweet could use two more hashtags, but your video and gifs on itchio page are excellent
The game looks very cool and very interesting, pretty damn unique too. The tweet is worded well too. The "Blow up boats" text in the video confused me the first time watching because there was so much time between them appearing, and I though the word "up" was just randomly appearing.
I think you'd really elevate the video by adding some more camera angles if possible? The game itself looks very fun though :)
SOOO coool. Love your water effects and your pitch tweet is very good!
+ Fun, popping text and vibe
+ Combat is a tall drink of water
- The combat could use some more clarity; it was tough to see what was being shot and when we were being attacked.
"Combat is a tall drink of water" I like that. I'm in desperate need of aquatic themed puns lol
Nice art and really funny game.. I like the style but maybe direct call button on the twitt will help people to download the demo