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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Theme | #1256 | 2.500 | 2.500 |
Cleverness | #1413 | 2.500 | 2.500 |
Playability | #1486 | 2.000 | 2.000 |
Artistic Style | #1697 | 2.000 | 2.000 |
Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.
- While what was presented in the GDD (regarding the story) seems interesting in regards to the themes; where it feels like there is a secret society being presented, along with the use of light sources in order to hide (in the shadows) and from enemies, were incorporated well. I found the artistic approach to this to be decently done, and the little mascot is cute as well. The music felt catchy, and I'd like to have more to listen to. The playability was simple; I found no issues with the controls, but the collection of items didn't really stand out to me, in regards to how they tied back to the themes in your game. The only thing I can relay that aspect back to is the story you presented. Overall, I'd like to see more of this game expanded upon with more levels and or more story that presents both shadow and alchemy as a 'unit'. All the same, keep up the hard work.
- Your game is easy to control and is a nice playable prototype/proof of concept. The movement is very rigid and there is very little going on in game. I did not understand a strong connection to the theme while playing beyond shadows being avoiding the guards' gazes. I'd encourage you to try fleshing out the game, seeing where you can make small improvements to each element and to incorporate unique mechanics to make your game stand out.
Did you include your Game Design Document as a Google Drive link?
Yes
Seriously... did you include your Game Design Document?
Yes
Is your game set to Public so we can see it?
Yes
Tell us about your game!
Stealth game, where player avoids enemies line of sight.
Controls
WASD - Character Movment
Q/E - Camera Rotation
ESC - Pause
Player must collect 2 objects, a cube and a capsule, on the level to be able to finish it. There is only one playable level.
Extra Notes
I have never made a game before. I thank (and blame) Lain for everything that i made. I hope to continue this project in the future, without a deadline so i don't stress out about it all the time.
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Comments
Good job on your first game. You can improve it a lot after the jam and learn from it to make even better games in future. My suggestion would be to add animation even if they are very simple, some music and SFX because these small details make the game a lot more fun.
Thank you!
I do plan on adding all those, we just didn't have time to do that. Working a job and learning how to make a game at the same time was a lot, but also great fun. I will continue to develop this game after voting over.
And again, thank you for playing and a feedback !