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A jam submission

The Little StorytellerView game page

Small puzzle game with a little fellow
Submitted by The Magic Stardust — 3 days, 7 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Cleverness#4233.0003.000
Artistic Style#4693.0003.000
Playability#4873.0003.000
Theme#11531.0001.000

Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • GDD: Good intro, and I agreed. Dont do finals during game jam. Good wall of text. Perhaps breaking it even more down to shorter text, so it is easy to read. Compact the text in that sense. Perhaps have an development timeline will help with the time management and feature management, so it is less stress. Glad to see you had fun! Will we see you in the next jam? Game: The game starts nice, but it need main menu and audio control. And there are typos in the dialogue. Unkown is supposed to be unknown. Dialogue starts to repeated itself in a loop without an end. Nice game, but I dont get the theme from this?

Did you include your Game Design Document in your downloadable files?
Yes and also added a drive in the game description

Tell us about your game!
Controls:
- Move with the left and right arrow key.
- Press the enter key to open the table.
- Press C inside the table to create a new element if the correct ones are inside the right side of the table.
- Press T inside or outisde of the table to tell a story depending on the elements inside the table.
- Hover and click with the mouse to interact with the elements in the table.
Press the ESC key for fullscreen or again to leave the fullscreen,
- If a special sentence in the text part appears it means that you can create a new element.
- You can move around while the story is told.
- At the beginning, there is a small explenation of the game controle. Move a bit after it shows the whole text.
- You can only interact with the table outside the telling, which you can see if the "Press Enter" appears after the telling.

Did you remember to include your Game Design Document?
Yes

Is your game set to Public so we can see it?
Yes

Extra Notes
Have fun with the game!

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