AHHH PERCUSSION!

I like the feeling... Hope? Cool!

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Nice spooky vibe in Alone Among Myself. The use of dissonance helped a lot and also to generate contrast with the following tracks.

I love your minimalist music and your use of Timp, without a doub...very effective!!

GREAT WORK!!

I love me some dissonance and I’m so glad your entry had some! I can hear the Fair Fountain influence but you add your own take on the inspiration which is really refreshing. 

I think a lot of the tracks lacked syncopation. Most notes from every instrument came in on the beat only and it cause the songs to stale a lot faster.

Try mixing up the rhythms of your melodies.

Hey great job! It's my first jam submission as well. As someone said below I think some different instruments throughout each track would go a long way - the strings get a bit tiring. I like the dissonant notes! What's great about game music is it's in the background most of the time while the player is playing, right? So dissonant notes aren't so harsh on the ear - but they still evoke emotion

This is one of the most interesting compositions I've heard in all of the pieces I've reviewed for the jam. It is because of the chord choices and the dissonant melody. I felt however (as wildionio also mentions) more dynamic expressions in your strings would have really lifted this piece up. The composition and all the fun stuff is there except the expression part, which makes it less fluid and more rigidy. But this is just constructive criticism, overall I really liked your entry! Keep up the good work !

I would really appreciate if you could also rate my entry too !

Thanks !

Good job! I think some more varied instrumentation would be helpful. Having recurring instruments is great for cohesion, but variety never hurts. 

There was some either clipping or sample noise I was hearing throughout as well.

I definitely heard the M64 and LoZ influences!

Alone Among Myself is the most interesting composition for me - very bold harmonic choices here, at times quite dissonant which is cool. The pizzicato with marimba is a great pair! Dynamic expression in your strings would be a game changer, and I wonder if it would sound better to have the marimba in time with the chord changes instead of the melody (just an idea). Good job with keeping a cohesive sound throughout the soundtrack!

You would definitely hear the late 90s Nintendo influence. I was oddly reminder of Banjo & Kazooie if he had been embarking on an epic quest under water. Very cool stuff.