Play book
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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Concepts & Originality | #24 | 3.778 | 3.778 |
Adherence to Theme | #35 | 3.407 | 3.407 |
Overall | #42 | 3.111 | 3.111 |
Flow & Clarity | #53 | 2.148 | 2.148 |
Ranked from 27 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This conjured up memories of Modest Medusa, only with a more adult human age level. The ability to shapechange between Giant Snek/Lamia/Teeny Hooman forms was a mood too. Would have been good to be shown why she thought Paul was 'the coolest human' than just be told. Show don't tell is a good rule to follow. It also makes stories feel less like an author just singing unfounded praises for their characters like some awful movie and television lines out there.
Really, really love the idea. Great sense of humor, despite the grim setting. The characters are really great, too. You have a lot of potential--I'd strongly encourage you to learn more (formally) about writing. If you could organize your paragraphs, sort your punctuation, and keep your tenses consistent, this could be fantastic!
I second this almost completely!
Agreed!
I agree as well!