Some odd contractions, like ["[stuff said]" Yelled.] 

Was that to reduce the word count? A writing choice?

 I did like the Marauder Rokka (Rocker?) idea, and the team up to slay the big honcho Demon was one of the more Metal things I've read here this voting cycle. Could read more adventures of Orc+DAO.

This was a fun read! You did a great job with the dialogue especially, it flows well and gives each character a distinct voice.