A very good story, one of the best in this roster. I liked all of the world building that was crammed into this perfectly paced tale. It was a really good snapshot into the dynasties, and could definitely service as an introduction to their lore.

There ain't more I can say.

Good job, I'm excited for your work next jam?

My favorite so far! Loved how the Dynasty and how Koa Jeng himself was characterized.

A great Eternal Dynasty submission! I'm impressed with how completely you were able to develop the faction's character in so short a story.

A well-constructed sci-fi scenario that presents a vivid picture of a desperate battle. The sense of being caught between insurmountable odds is palpable. The interplay of clans and the introduction of different threats adds depth to the narrative.