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A jam submission

Role of the NavigatorView project page

A Grimdark Future Tale of the Perils of Denial by GE Marsh
Submitted by Hobby Fuzion — 13 hours, 50 minutes before the deadline
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Role of the Navigator's itch.io page

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Concept & Originality#44.4294.429
Overall#103.9373.937
Adherence to the Theme#133.8103.810
Flow & Clarity#223.5713.571

Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted

Was lost at first but then it all clicked beautifully. Well done! The use of memories, rebirth, and cyclical journeys inter-meld nicely

Submitted

Crisp, evocative, with a whole world of sentences I'd love to peer further into. Splendid.

Submitted

wow. that was intense! was a little hard to follow, but a great story never the less.

Submitted

That was quite a ride! I found it a little hard to follow at times due to the density of the language and the sheer number of ideas you were working into paragraphs near the end, but overall I liked the effect of the "memory cascade". The overall effect and impact of the piece was very powerful.

DeveloperSubmitted

Totally agree with the clarity disparity that needed a LOT of editing, that writing deadline crept up fast and bit me!

Submitted

Wow, quite stunned by this one. Great job!

DeveloperSubmitted

Thankyou, that's very kind of you to say.

DeveloperSubmitted

Thanks, was a lot of fun to write and glad you enjoyed it!

Submitted

This was something else, really liked the ending

Submitted

Hey just letting you know the pdf file is showing as "file not found" for me! I'll check back in a couple days to see if this is just an itch error

DeveloperSubmitted

hmm, not sure what the problem is, but am looking into it as it seems to have been read by others, maybe the website was glitching? Will check the uploads and put feelers out to see if this is widespread, thanks for trying!