I really like this adventure idea! I'd want to see a more detailed jumping off point by giving the players a couple clues to start. I do enjoy the free form structure but a few more connections between locations, clues, and rival gangs to give the GM a better understanding. I also want more description of what a 'major scene' involves. Keep up the good work!
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The Kandhara Contraband's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Clarity - is the structure of the adventure clear enough? | #6 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Timely - is the proposed adventure suitable as a one-shot? | #7 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Presentation - is the game material good looking? | #8 | 2.000 | 2.000 |
| Completeness - does the adventure contain all the material to be played? | #8 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Originality - does the adventure contain original plot and situations? | #8 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Overall | #9 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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