This is great. I love the way you've mashed the genres together into a big campy romp -- definitely leans into the pulpy vibe of L&F in the best way.
Favourite details: The names are fantastic, for starters. "Billy Oblivion" and "Elijah Moon" are both pretty incredible. I also love that everyone has a "loyal mechanical steed," and that the goals are a great mix of western and romance. Honestly, all the little details are great -- "Bessie the laser cow" is particularly campy and delightful.
Maybe next time: The body text is just a liiiittle tricky for me to read. It might just be me though! I really dig the aesthetic you pulled together, and I can see why you went with the style you did; it does feel like a great midpoint of western and spacey. It might also be nice to have a little passage about player consent if there's PC-PC romance situations? You don't have a lot of space to work with, but it would be a nice nod to safety tools!
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This is great. I love the way you've mashed the genres together into a big campy romp -- definitely leans into the pulpy vibe of L&F in the best way.
Favourite details: The names are fantastic, for starters. "Billy Oblivion" and "Elijah Moon" are both pretty incredible. I also love that everyone has a "loyal mechanical steed," and that the goals are a great mix of western and romance. Honestly, all the little details are great -- "Bessie the laser cow" is particularly campy and delightful.
Maybe next time: The body text is just a liiiittle tricky for me to read. It might just be me though! I really dig the aesthetic you pulled together, and I can see why you went with the style you did; it does feel like a great midpoint of western and spacey. It might also be nice to have a little passage about player consent if there's PC-PC romance situations? You don't have a lot of space to work with, but it would be a nice nod to safety tools!
Thank you for sharing your game!
Thanks for the feedback! We're glad you liked it. We hear you on the font choice. Hopefully the text-only version helps in this regard.