Hello Nameless Designer... IF THAT EVEN IS YOUR NAME!?!?
Haha, you should sign this cause it's pretty fun and good. I'm running around giving feedback to those who submit to the Jam and had some thoughts:
1. The layout is great! Super clean. Very good. And I love that we have a bullet list of what to expect.
2. The character design is great. Rising dice abilities are some of my favorite things to use. In 2 - 3, you might want to keep the terminology as Dice Levels. The Background Info is a nice, flavorful touch.
3. Mechanics are good. I like the +/- 10 critical / botch.
4. Minor thing: Having the tables on the one page and the rules on the other... I didn't love. But I understand that is part the one page formatting.
5. The match is super cool. Reminds me of this prototype board game a friend of mine made! I'm seeing how the actions and specials would fit in.
6. ALL THE TABLES ARE SO GOOD!!! You've baked so much theme / setting into them.
Overall, GREAT JOB. You should be super proud of your work here... and feel proud signing it ☺
Hello there, here's my first ever submission for an rpg design contest. Playtesting is required and feedback is welcome so I can tweak and refine the rules and get the game balance right. Enjoy!
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Hello Nameless Designer... IF THAT EVEN IS YOUR NAME!?!?
Haha, you should sign this cause it's pretty fun and good. I'm running around giving feedback to those who submit to the Jam and had some thoughts:
1. The layout is great! Super clean. Very good. And I love that we have a bullet list of what to expect.
2. The character design is great. Rising dice abilities are some of my favorite things to use. In 2 - 3, you might want to keep the terminology as Dice Levels. The Background Info is a nice, flavorful touch.
3. Mechanics are good. I like the +/- 10 critical / botch.
4. Minor thing: Having the tables on the one page and the rules on the other... I didn't love. But I understand that is part the one page formatting.
5. The match is super cool. Reminds me of this prototype board game a friend of mine made! I'm seeing how the actions and specials would fit in.
6. ALL THE TABLES ARE SO GOOD!!! You've baked so much theme / setting into them.
Overall, GREAT JOB. You should be super proud of your work here... and feel proud signing it ☺
Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed reading it and appreciate the tip on use of the term 'dice levels.'
Damn!! I was just about to do a wrestling RPG! Now I'm biased :)
I haven't read yours yet, I will
Hello there, here's my first ever submission for an rpg design contest. Playtesting is required and feedback is welcome so I can tweak and refine the rules and get the game balance right. Enjoy!