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A jam submission

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Pers character with no name and no personal life
Submitted by SmollaGames — 18 hours, 34 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Adherence to restrictions#2073.7653.765
Enjoyment#2222.5882.588
Overall#2492.6762.676
Design#2622.4712.471
Polish#2791.8821.882

Ranked from 17 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

The last but one level was unexpected. ;)

The movement feels a bit fluid and the level design is a bit confusing. The game has a good base. With a bit of further work this could be really cool!

Developer

I will trying on BrackeysJam))

Submitted(+1)

I like where you're going with your baby steps! Keep the good work up and you'll be a master in no time 😎

Developer

Yeah its true

Submitted(+1)

Way better than my first game jam submission! Good Job! Maybe try and learn a bit of animation and this game would be fantastic for a small project. To prove a point here is my first game jam game https://retrorealms.itch.io/distant-home

Developer

Yeah, thanks!!!!

Submitted(+1)

The camera lag makes it hard to see where you're going, and not having a tutorial makes it kinda confusing, but it's pretty good for a simple nokia game! Nice job!

Developer(+1)

thanks for your understanding, I will do even better👌

Submitted(+1)

The physics works nice and adds a fun element. You can probably reuse it for other game ideas.

 I would add an objective in at least your game page like "find the way out!" It would also help to show a game over/win screen, too. Congrats on submitting your first game!

Developer

Thanks for the comment. It helped me a lot!

Submitted(+1)

The only problem I have is that I just kept saying "where do I have to go?"

Except that, the game is cool, but could have some improvements

Good game

Developer (1 edit)

Wow, that sounds inspiring!

Submitted(+1)

There is not much to it, but clever level design are what sold me on this title. Keep making more games, I see a future here, a cool one.

Developer

Thank you, I drew conclusions, and your comment went down in history!