A meditation on the thoughts of posta, delivery people. Navigation is done by clicking on different parts of letter envelopes (usually the stamp). It is very clever and cool.
This is one of my first encounters with Interactive Fiction; after a longstanding on-and-off want to learn Twine. I wanted to see examples of IF-games for myself and selected this due to the potentially chilling premise. And despite its short length, I was floored by this. The writing is impeccable; with vivid words and detail that paint the chilling tone perfect. Accompanied with the bleak piano tune, it's paced in a way cutthroat as the speaker themselves, leaving me way more chilled than I thought I'd be going into it. :0c
Honestly, it's an insane display of talent to have me feeling all sorts of emotions while simultaneously making me question and wanting more from a game that genuinely didn't even take me more than five minutes to read through, if even that. Good job!!! I definitely can't wait to see more from you. :>
I'm not the best at talking about poetry, but I really enjoyed this! The imagery, the pacing, the use of sensory detail to convey complex emotions, and the repetition; it was all very effective and efficient!