You have a pretty dark setting, which is very well done into the game. The graphics are "simple" but they fit the game just right. Even the soundtrack is perfect with the game. However, I think your gameplay sticks more than your story. I'm not a tactical games player, but I was so focused on trying to make the best moves that the story was passing me by a bit. Maybe if in some moves, or when grabbing the pieces, the characters would stop and talk, instead of just having the text on the right, it would make the story stick out more.
The characters abilites are interesting, even though I did not get to use all of them, but they work well together.
I think you have a good foundation for something bigger.
As I said before, if you can make the story have more focus, then in my opinion you can create a good narrative game :)

Ooh-hoo-hoo, now that is what I like to call interesting! The idea of a narrative driven eldritch horror turn based tactics game like this with randomized elements is fantastic. Those passages display some truly out there horror that's described well enough to make it unsettling while also being so strange that just imagining it is hard. I like that. 

While I like what the game is going for, I think its gameplay could be refined further. I didn't always feel like I was under as much pressure or danger as the writing implied, and death can actually be avoided entirely with relative ease if you don't get impatient or reckless; admittedly, being patient and careful can actually be difficult at times when you wanna see more of what the game's generated, so that's also a factor. 

I think it could benefit from making the meteor chunks you collect a bigger part of the experience, both reinforcing their significance as a narrative object and making you want to hop on those reserves more eagerly. Maybe use them as resources for abilities like the hammer fella's space switching or the healing ability. As it stands, you can use those special abilities pretty freely without much consequence. 

This has so much potential and room to grow. I really like what's on the table here.

Man, what a vibe! Yet another game dripping with atmosphere. I loved co-ordinating the different characters, and I loved the prose - there were some incredibly bizarre passages in there. 

I did feel a slight disconnect between the prose and the narrative communicated through the gameplay, and I would often forget to read the passages to the right because I was so immersed in the tactical side of things. Maybe that issue could be avoided if it alternated between prose and gameplay instead?