I am very sorry, but i am unable to score the story because the little i know of Portuguese is not enough to fully understand it.

What i can tell however, is that it is noticeable that you put a lot of effort into it, so it is a shame i could not enjoy it as i should.

Maybe it's just me, but I couldn't find a way to change the language. Although my portuguese isn't the best, I still could understand the story (or at least that's what I think haha), but people who can't understand portuguese won't be able to truly experience the game, which is a shame since I can tell you put a lot of effort into it and the Rita character is quite interesting. Language issue aside, the art is fantastic and Rita's design is amazing. 

Also, it would have been really nice if there were sound effects and music, but it's understandable since this is a 10 day jam.

Still, you all did a great job!