One of the principal advantages to this game lies in its reserved simplicity. This alone captures the simple nature of the protagonist, rendering her relatable. Not too much time is wasted upon flipping through pre-baked dialogue, so a lot seems to hinge upon just a few choices. This one has been one of my favourites so far!! My only constructive criticism (of which none is destructive) is to fix your speling. [sic] (Yes: omitting "L's" or putting extra "L's" in was a frequent problem.)
You have a natural knack for this; Keep it up!! Don't forget to read other submissions.
I still need to improve my english and spelling! I will be more careful and try having a beta reader next time! I will keep it up! thank you so much!! : )
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One of the principal advantages to this game lies in its reserved simplicity. This alone captures the simple nature of the protagonist, rendering her relatable. Not too much time is wasted upon flipping through pre-baked dialogue, so a lot seems to hinge upon just a few choices. This one has been one of my favourites so far!! My only constructive criticism (of which none is destructive) is to fix your speling. [sic] (Yes: omitting "L's" or putting extra "L's" in was a frequent problem.)
You have a natural knack for this; Keep it up!! Don't forget to read other submissions.
[({L.J.)}]
thank you for playing and your feedback!
I still need to improve my english and spelling! I will be more careful and try having a beta reader next time! I will keep it up! thank you so much!! : )