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A jam submission

System AtomView game page

Don't break the system!
Submitted by Random Ideation Studios — 3 hours, 5 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Audio#153.5453.545
Innovation/Design#193.5453.545
Overall#243.3273.327
Fun#253.4093.409
Theme/Lore Reference#343.1823.182
Aesthetic#512.9552.955

Ranked from 22 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How did you incorporate the theme and lore?
It is Defence infinity game and you should not Break the System and if you, you have to break it again!!!!

And for the lore I used both one in tutorial for fun and other in the gameplay

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Submitted

Hey there! I streamed your game and reviewed it before the rating period ended. I enjoyed your game and I hope you had a fun experience!

Submitted (1 edit)

Totally loved the game. And sorry for playing it so late , as my examinations are going on!!!!!UI looks gorgeous :D

Developer(+1)

Thanks a lot for your support and All the best for the exams!!!

Submitted

This has a really nice design.  The atom concept is pretty cool too. I think it'd be fun to have optional 'bonus' particles to collect while you're waiting for others to get to you.

Developer

I love the idea of that and thanks a lot for your feedback!!!

Submitted

Loved the music! Interesting concept

Submitted (2 edits)

I had fun with this one! Thought the collisions were very well made.

I also loved that you could get the laser-beams to hit eachother, it felt so satisfying!

Only issue i had with the game was that as soon as i changed direction, the background music volume ducked (like a side-chain), it became annoying after a couple of minutes.


Developer

Oh!! I never saw that problem but anyway thanks for letting me know!

Submitted

I think the game could've benefited from some juice. Screen shakes, particles, etc. Solid entry though.

Developer

Thanks a lot for your feedback
But I added the screen shake
it worked?? 

Submitted

When the center was hit, yes, but the bulk of the gameplay is defending the center with the Neutrons. Would've been nice to see the game react to blocking with them.

Submitted

It's an easy game, which is very much a plus in game jams, and the music is really good too, the only things I'd say is that, as others said, the neutrons are also in the nucleus of the atom, the ones outside are the electrons lol.

And if you run out of neutrons you can't do much more than wait while lasers  got in. I'd also say that the switch should be with the same key, if you can only switch from right to left and left to right then there's no use having separate keys for each switch.

Overall it's pretty good!

Developer

Thanks a lot for your feedback!!!
I will surely add the same key post jam!

Fun entry!  the music was great, and I really appreciated that there was more than one song. As for the game play, it was really cool that some of the lasers missed the atom core entirely so in order to get a higher score you want to recognize those when they happen and not waste your limited resources on them.  Adds a lot of skill to the game.  well done. 

Developer

Thanks a lot for your support!
I never though about my game this much!!!!

I really like how you took "break the system" theme literally, I lasted only 5 minutes but I LOVED the music and the gameplay was so much fun I think this is my favorite game of the jam!

Developer

Oh! Thanks a lot for support!!
This idea pop up due to my mom bcoz she is a chemistry teacher!!!!

Submitted

Thanks for making the game! I do love me a strategy game and it had me plan out when to rotate the Nucleus around. The music and sound was so well done, like I felt the inner science in me when playing lol. As for gameplay it felt too basic as there wasn't much I needed to do and there wasn't any progression in like a new enemy or any new thinking. Also, the tutorial was a tad bit filled with too much information which at first glance can be overwhelming to learn fast. The videos for the tutorials  were also not showing which made the learning process a bit harder to understand. Overall great game!

Developer

Oh!! Thanks a lot for your feedback!!1
I am not that good with tutorials and my first text tutorial so thanks a lot on that!

Submitted

The game is interesting, but there are 2 problems:

1) there are moments when you have less neutrons than lasers

2) this is not the structure of an atom. The electrons(-) aren't in the nucleum, they are orbitating around the nucleum. In the nucleum are the protons(+) and the neutrons(N)

Overall, the game and the art is great

Developer (1 edit)

Yeah I forget to add that this game doesn't present real science in game but anyway thanks for your feedback!

Submitted

Great stress-relief game, i found it fun due to playing it infinitely, at the minute mark i find it luck based depending on where the neutron spawned. Good Game!

Developer

Thanks a lot for your feedback!

Submitted

Great stress-relief game, i found it fun due to playing it infinitely, at the minute mark i find it luck based depending on where the neutron spawned. Good Game!

Submitted

Great game. I would have liked to be able to toggle directions with a single button. Despite that, it was still a fun mechanic and it is an interesting take on tower defense.

Developer

Thanks for your support and feedback!!

Submitted

The music is really dope, but you’re killing the vibe by ducking it every time you switch the direction. I think because of the simplicity of this game, this additional player feedback is really not necessary.

I survived about 5 min, and at that point the game had gotten a bit boring. I think you need to spice it up with time.

Developer

Thanks a lot for your support and feedback
I made the game easy only bcoz for the all players can atleast survive longer period

Submitted

Simple,but POG game

Developer

One thing, idk what is POG if you could explain my about that!?!?

Submitted

its something really nice

Submitted

I absolutely loved this game. This is  the type of simple creativity I wish I had. To make a quick easy game. This could easily be made into a mobile game. The music was great and I loved the art style. What I'd really like to see, is a 3D version. Something with an art style of Geometry Wars and particle effects going off left and right would be so much fun. 

Great job! 

Developer

Thanks a lot for your suggestions and Yeah I will try to make a mobile game and release for android!

Submitted(+1)

Great game! You should make a mobile version!

Developer

Thanks a lot for support!