Great to see a fellow Nepalese game dev. 

Loved the game! Keep that up :)

You don't have to be so negative we all have to Start somewhere with programming video games and if it is the RPG Maker Kit from Unity that doesn't mean your game isn't any good. I really like the dialogue and you seem to have tried your best. I would personally always recommend Brackeys for a start into Unity Game Development he even has a video on the RPG Maker Kit :P. https://www.youtube.com/user/Brackeys Continue on your Journey and Good Luck.