Please use this form if you'd like critique on your game!

Game Title/URL: Self-explanatory.  Link your game here. 

Pitch/Information: A short description of the game.

I'd like feedback on: You can put a list, questions, or description of what you would like critique on. Can be "anything!" if you're not looking for anything specific.

I need help on: Optional; remove if unnecessary, but if you have a specific problem or bug that you would like help or advice with solving, put it here!

We ask you use a play-for-play model for giving and receiving feedback; if someone plays your game, try playing theirs.

Game Title/URL: Treasures of Mictlan

Pitch/Information: Journey to the Aztec Underworld as Quetzalcoatl and retrieve the currently non-existent as it's a barebones prototype precious bones of humans past so that the Fifth Age, our current age, may be ushered in!

I'd like feedback on: I'm open for any kind of critique or feedback! Specifically, I'd like feedback on the artstyle and what improvements I could make on it, the music, and any tips on how to improve the animation. I'd also love to hear any ideas about what else you think could/should be included into it.

Game Title/URL: https://kaiccc.itch.io/dont-break-cycle

Pitch/Information: Break all rectangle object. 

I'd like feedback on: Anything!

I need help on: Advice level design and the rule win or lose for game.

Game Title/URL: https://romanleco.itch.io/radicalrumble

Pitch/Information: Kill enemies and choose how you want to evolve.

I'd like feedback on: Anything.

Game Title/URL: Stitch & Patch

Pitch/Information: Stitch & Patch! Puzzle-solving game with shape cutting! Supports single-player or multiplayer through the internet!

I'd like feedback on: This is out first attempt at a multiplayer game via the internet, so we would appreciate it if you can play with your friend and give us some feedback on how is the multiplayer functioning for you! However, anything feedback on any front of the game would be welcomed! Also, if you feel like this demo has the potential for a full game, please consider leaving a comment!

I need help on: Ideas for puzzle / level design!

Game Title

🔵 Circle Pusher 🟢

Pitch

Play as a rocket-powered spinning glowy circle and fight against your opponents in a best-of-5 Battle. Each round, you can equip new parts and install powerful modules to improve your chances for success.

I'd like feedback on

• Can you see potential in the current version?
• Can you see yourself playing this against a friend?
• Do you think it's a good idea to keep player controls tied to an item?
• Any cool ideas for parts or abilities I can add?

I need help on

Music and Sound Design - if you are interested in helping me improve this, let me know :)

Again!https://voidgazerbon.itch.io/again

Pitch: Again! is a puzzle-platformer game in which even death moves you towards your goal. The game was developed in Pico8.

I’d like feedback on: I started with game development like two weeks ago so any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Game Title/URL: https://farzadevan.itch.io/greenwood-incident-demo

Pitch/Information: This my First game a short horror experience

I'd like feedback on: Anything. however the game is not fully finished and it still need some work but since i was running out of time i just wanted to finish it for now

Game Title/URL: https://ademk.itch.io/victory-and-respect

Pitch/Information: game about the topic "cycle"

I'd like feedback on: i already posted 1st version of the game for the midtest session and changed few things since then. I am open tor more propositions of the changes for the game

Hey everyone!

Game Title/URL: CORPO | MENTE, (BODY | MIND in italian)

Information: A short point-and-click/visual novel hybrid, focused on a surreal story, visuals and animations. In this game you rebuild your body and mind to be reborn after you have lost your body.

I'd like feedback on: Mainly the game design / coding, and overall feel of the game. I am a philosophy student, not a coding student: i learnt Godot and GDScript out of pure passion and, as such, I don't really have much experience with it.

I need help on: Windows for some reason flags my game as potentially malicious, and I don't really know how to stop that from happening! (I am using Godot 4.1.1)

Game Title/URL: https://poltergeisha3.itch.io/beetlewing-the-metamorphosis

Pitch/Information: BeetleWing: The Metamorphosis is an exciting arcade shooter that puts you in the driver's seat of an insect spaceship on a mission to protect a rare egg while harnessing the power of metamorphosis to switch between unique forms.

I'd like feedback on: The music primarily, but all feedback is appreciated!

Game Title/URL: Cycle of life and death

Pitch/Information: Defend your cyrstals of life against the hordes of hell, bringing nothing but death!

I'd like feedback on: Anything you want! Would appreciate any thoughts or comments.

Cyclical battle - https://denbread.itch.io/cyclical-battle

Information: You get to the island. Where you are trying to survive from monsters. Run, survive and score points
I'd like feedback on: How do you like the game?

Game Title/URL: Scurry Scramble

Pitch/Information: You play as a squirrel who wants to scare all birds to have all their food for itself. The more birds are present the more food they eat every 3s. 

I'd like feedback on: If the game logic and UI are clear. I'm also wondering how important art is for this kind of game. I'm thinking about adding more diversity of objects you can jump on and different types of birds (for example craws that eat more and are more difficult to scare off) but I wonder if I should redesign art first.

Game Title/URL: https://rosesrot.itch.io/mortal-coil

Pitch/Information: After being cancelled, your sister Sonoko has inexplicably joined the reality TV death game, MORTAL COIL… and you, Ikuyo, must choose whether to follow Sonoko into the depths of destruction, risking your life to save your sister who seems all too eager to play. A cyberpunk deconstruction of YouTube, Twitch, and VTuber culture.

I’d like feedback on: Anything! What you thought about the game— the storytelling, the visuals, the pacing, and what you’d expect out of the full version.

Game Title/URL: https://joe345.itch.io/space-ace

Pitch/Information: You control a spaceship and race through levels while shooting targets along the way trying to get the best time.

Feedback: Anything, it's the first game I made so I'd like to know any way I could improve.

I need help on: Getting the game to work as a web game, when I tried uploading an HTML version it was extremely laggy so any tips on how that could be optimized would be appreciated. (edit: I got the web version working ok, turns out it wasn't an issue with the game, I just had the "Use hardware acceleration when available" setting in my browser turned off)

Game Title/URL: https://porterweston.itch.io/palinova-prototype

Pitch/Information: Palinova is a metroidvania with a twist, you can only upgrade your player with resources you find in a 'run' after you die. This is a very rough prototype of this concept.

I'd like feedback on: I would mainly love feedback on how the player looks in terms of color palette and animation, and on the color palette/look of the game in general so far (outside of UI, most or all of the UI is currently a placeholder). I would also appreciate feedback on the gameplay loop, and if you found it fun/boring and why.

I need help on: I had problems with the player being jittery when moving around. I used Unity to make the game, and I used rigidbody velocity to move the player and I moved the camera by setting it's transform position. I read online something about how it causes problems when using physics to move units and using a frame-based method to move the camera, but I don't really know another way to do it.

Thanks for reading and thanks to the jam organizers!

Game Title/URL: https://midsa756.itch.io/colors-cycke

Pitch/Information: my first platformer

I'd like feedback on: 

yes anything

https://discord.com/channels/1131977022130888784/1131980838905581588/11376556232...

AUGMENTED

A unique game about upgrading into a cybernetic marvel as you hack 'n' slash your way through an infinitely generated dungeon.
Would be great to receive feedback on new mechanics we could implement, new enemies, and how well we did with art, programming, and music!