Please use this form if you'd like critique on your game!

Game Title/URL: Self-explanatory.  Link your game here. 

Pitch/Information: A short description of the game.

I'd like feedback on: You can put a list, questions, or description of what you would like critique on. Can be "anything!" if you're not looking for anything specific.

I need help on: Optional; remove if unnecessary, but if you have a specific problem or bug that you would like help or advice with solving, put it here!

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Game Title/URL: https://nev9n.itch.io/break-free

Pitch/Information: A short puzzle-platformer about breaking stuff in a warehouse. Made by me and my dad.

I'd like feedback on: Anything! :)

Game Title / URL :  In Front Of Heaven's Gates : https://itch.io/jam/my-first-game-jam-summer-2021/rate/1114940

Info : An angel sent to decide people's fates You are free to choose whether the humans are going to hell or heaven but watch out, your choices might have consequences.

I would like to get some feedback even if the game is maybe too simple. 

I would like to continue developing it and add new features as I had a lot of fun working on it.

Game: Little Spy

• Pitch: Airdrop into an enemy stronghold, recover stolen intelligence and technology. Fight your way out!

I used this jam as motivation to learn Godot and make a game. This is the first game I’ve made since the 1980s. I’d like feedback on anything 🙂

Game title/URL: FREE Up Some Space by piratetom8 (itch.io)

Pitch: Use a Ball and Chain to go on a rampage in the city in order to FREE up some space in this high-scored based arcade game. 

Feedback: Anything

Game: Free the Ocean

Pitch: You play as The Seahorse and have to traverse the seafloor to free other ocean dwellers from falsely discarded trash. It's a short but fun puzzle game. 

I'd like feedback on Anything, but specifically I am unsure of how well the puzzles actually work, its very had to judge how tough they are when you made them. 

Game Title/URL: Lukot

Pitch/Information: A quirky puzzle game about ruining lovely patterns! This game is designed to make you think and offer a nice challenge with satisfying gameplay.

I'd like feedback on: Level difficulty, ideas for future levels and changes to visual aspects.

Game Title: Abyss Free https://ryqshaw.itch.io/abyssfree

Description: Platform and fight your way through a crypt of the undead to free your soul!
I'd like feedback on: anything, this is my first game ever so any and all feedback is helpful for learning

Game title/URL: Try a New Normal in One Month Nickname Try One.

Pitch/Information: Platformer Simulation game. Try One is you are what you eat game. Each day, You must choose the right food and then go out to work (by fighting enemies) By the food eaten, Carbohydrates will give you more attack power. Fat can move well. And protein will help us develop more abilities.

I'd like feedback on: I intend to keep the game away in a serious game but we cannot reflect all the nutrients that we consume in normal gameplay. Do you think this game makes you aware of eating healthy and proper food? I really hope so.
By the way, you can comment on anything. Even the game has the potential to make it bigger. :D

Game Title/URL: The Last Cave

Pitch/Information: You find yourself awake in a small cave, with only a bed made of twigs and leaves, a kettle for water, and a campfire for warmth. You must survive, even if there are no predators around.

I'd like feedback on: Anything would be helpful!

Game Title/URL:  https://lilfatss.itch.io/test

Pitch/Information: Action game with a plot . Read the recomandations in the community section before playing .

I'd like feedback on: Anything 

https://magicqube.itch.io/my-first-game-jam-free

What would you do when the god of death is standing in front of you,

offering you a "free" chance of judging people, sending them to heaven or hell as you like?

This 5min short visual novel tells a story of free choices.

However we all know that, free stuff is always more expensive than priced ones.

Game Title/URL: The Last Bastion of Mana

https://floormatt6400.itch.io/thelastbastionofmana

Description:

An endless tower defense game suited for all ages. Try and get the farthest as unstoppable waves and waves of The Swarm try to attack your city. Good luck and have fun!

Feedback:

Any and all feedback is welcome and appreciated! Push the game to its limits and have fun while doing so! If you didn’t enjoy the game, let us know why!

Game Title/URL: Cathode Rush

Pitch/Information: A short, fast paced platformer where you need to shoot powerups to give yourself extra mid-air jumps to maneuver through the levels.  Keeps track of your time if you like speedrunning!

I'd like feedback on: Anything!