After playing it three times I was about to give up on getting to the end until I saw the edge of your final image. I then proceeded to play for another 30 minutes just so I could see what it said. Well worth the time and effort :p.

In terms of improvement, my personal preference would have been to add a checkpoint in the second level after you made it to the platform after the first water jumping puzzle. Other than that I felt the game was well done for what you had. The game shows that you put a lot of effort into level design, and you did an awesome job building the parallax effect with Pixatool.

I'm looking forward to what you create in the next jam.

This game is good, I like it so much. And I got some mistake when I go left in start point, even in first map or second map. Maybe you could check it later.

This is a really good game! I can really tell you put a lot of thought into how you're laying the levels out, also i really liked the artstyle