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A jam submission

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A short story about a mage and the sea.
Submitted by Kelly Betty — 6 minutes, 15 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Presentation#54.2904.290
Overall#173.8153.815
Enjoyment#233.6133.613
Concept#303.7423.742
Use of the Limitation#463.6133.613

Ranked from 31 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Team members
MayhemCats (me)

Software used
Bitsy

Use of the limitation
The limitation is incorporated into the story, as my game doesn't have combat. "It died in one hit" is a crucial aspect of the plot.

Cookies eaten
None... I want some!

How was your experience with Mini Jam?
I wish I could have made music for this. It feels so quiet... Blegh, if only I had time!! I started too late!

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Submitted(+1)

Omg the amount of personality and depth you were able to squeeze into this game with such limited colors is absolutely amazing. I loved it!

Developer

Aaa thank you so much!! <3 I'm really glad you think so!! That makes me happy!! Thank you!!

Submitted(+1)

That was a rather thoughtful use of the limitation.

Developer

Thanks a lot!! :D I'm glad you think so!! 

Submitted(+1)

thats a very interesting take on it, really nice stuff

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much!! <33 ; 7; I'm really glad you think so!! 

Submitted(+1)

I wish I could be a mage living in a seaside cottage, Very creative interpretation of the limitation, I like it! Very pleasing art style and intriguing story, I wish you had time to make it a longer! Great job!

Developer

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you like it!! <333 I'm glad you like my interpretation of the limitation! I tried so hard to make it make sense with the story. ;  7; Thank you for all the compliments, I'm so flattered!!

Submitted (2 edits) (+1)

I loved the artstyle (like a lot!) , it is something different and peaked my interest. The story itself was interesting, but I found it sad that I wasn't able to do anything besides walking. I would have loved to be able to interact or do something (maybe the fight between those two? to get more immersed in the story (music helps with that too)). Soooo I'm looking forward to more games in this artstyle with more interaction :D you can definitely work with that!

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much!! <33 I'm so glad you like the art!! And you're absolutely right, I'm gonna try to make the next ones more interactive!! Thank you!! :Dc And yeah, I really wish I could've made music for this game, but I sadly ran out of time... I might make some music for it after the jam is over just for fun! Thanks a lot again, I appreciate the advice and the compliments a lot!! <3

queef

Submitted(+1)

The game is amazing!!
The visuals and the storyline is perfect!! The sound feels nice.
Hard work pays off....
Loved the game<3
I really like RPG games and I made one for this jam too<3
Good luck for the jam. I hope you like other games too!!

Developer

Thank you so much!! ; 7;; I'm so glad you like it!! <33 Yess, RPGs are so fun!! And thanks a lot! I wish you good luck too, your game is great!!

Submitted(+1)

Well written and lovely looking game.  The atmosphere is rather nice even without music. 

Developer

Thanks a lot!! <33 I'm so glad you think so!! I really wish I could've added music. :'D I might after the jam is over, just for fun! 

Submitted

The game looked absolutely lovely. Nice job!

Developer

Thank you so much!! <33 I'm so glad you think so!!

Submitted(+1)

So cute! I love the cutscenes and the dialog boxes. You made the visual-novel gameplay fit the theme and limitation well. Ahh the monster was so adorable I'm so sad Wren had to hurt him :(

Great Jam!

Developer

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it!! ; 7; <33 I'm so flattered by all the compliments! 

Submitted

This looks great and I love the artwork but it seems like I'm having some kind input problem. I can't progress past the first screen. I'm obviously missing out. This looks amazing!

Developer

I'm very sorry! :< Does it happen every time you load it? Pressing the right arrow or D keys should be enough to get through all the cutscenes. I don't know where the issue could be!

Submitted(+1)

As a classic bitsy project, it's more a novel than a game but... The use of the features you had: quite impressive! Well done on the writing itself, the story was really intriguing till the last moments!

Loved the way the theme was used :-)

Developer(+1)

Thank you!! :D I'm so glad you like it!! I love working with Bitsy's restraints, which is why I wanted to try making something with it for the jam! It was such a fun experience!! Thanks a bunch! 

Submitted(+1)

lovely art and mystery, really enjoyed it :-)

Developer

Thank you so much!! <3 I'm glad you like it!!

Submitted(+1)

The ending gave me goosebumps! Really great story that had me on the edge of my seat. For 24 hours, this is very, very impressive!

Developer

I'm so glad it did!! Thanks a bunch! <3 I'm so glad you think so!! I'm flattered!!

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Developer

Aaa thank you!! I'm so glad you like it!! <33 And oo I wanna!! Someday... ; 7; Thank you!!

Submitted(+1)

Really amazing art style and short but interesting story! That was a clever implementation of the limitation into the story

Always nice to find some story games in game jams :)

Developer

Thanks a lot!! <33 I'm so glad you think so!! I adore story games so I wanted to make one, even if the limitation was a little hard to implement in one. ; 7; It was fun!! Thank you so much!!

Submitted(+1)

art is so cool man i want see more games like this by you

Developer

Aa thanks a bunch!! c: I'm so glad to hear that!!

Submitted(+1)

Dude, what was that ending? Surely didn't expect that. That was such a cute you-know-what though. Loved the story-telling and everything. Well done man.

Developer(+1)

Haha, thank you!! :'D I wanted to do a lot more foreshadowing, but the time constraints... And thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it! <3

Submitted(+1)

I really enjoyed this game! I know you said you wish it had music, but I thought it was great on its own! The art style is great! I loved your use of shaky text to convey emotion, and the transitions for the cutscenes were awesome! Overall a great job! And a great concept!

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much!! <33 I'm so glad you liked it! That's absolutely what I was going for with the shaky text, I'm so glad it worked! Thanks a bunch! 

Submitted(+1)

The game is stunning! There are so many aspect that make this game amazing, the story, the narrative, the simple control. It is relaxing and enjoying to keep playing into the story. I wish to see more of the story and future narrative! Great work!

Developer

Aaa thank you so much!! <3333 That means a lot to me, thank you!! I'm so glad you think so!! I'd love to expand on this story someday, this was so fun. Thanks again for the comment and all the compliments, I'm so flattered!! ; 7; ❤️

Submitted(+1)

Cute game, love the pixel art and sound design, and the palette was used really well. The game had a really chill vibe and was more relaxing than many of the other entries. I do wish I had some firmer idea of where the game would end up from the beginning, but that might just be my impatience talking. Overall a charming and friendly experience worth having, and a great submission for the jam.

Developer

Thank you!! <33 I'm flattered by all that! Thanks a bunch!!

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