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A jam submission

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A short story about you and your brother, Damon.
Submitted by Gastone_21 — 59 minutes, 46 seconds before the deadline

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Concept#603.0743.286
Presentation#722.8063.000
Overall#872.6392.821
Enjoyment#902.4052.571
Use of the Limitation#1122.2722.429

Ranked from 7 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Team members
Gastone_21

Software used
Twine

Use of the limitation
The character isn't sure about himself and his actions.

Cookies eaten
0 cookies, but a lot of junk stuff :'(

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Comments

It's a shame that there's only one ending, the game plot wise was very promising but this fact holds it down.

Developer

I understand. The thing is that for this to happen, I should add more options that would lead to other options, and all of these would lead to multiple endings. I'd like to have more time for that, but I hadn't.

Submitted

Whoa , this is a nice Game ! The music , SFX , story and mechanics -- all are so good and polished. Great job for a 3 day game jam !

Submitted

Who is the killer?

Developer

🤔 🤔 

Submitted(+1)

The killer is "Who ?" ... I guess

Submitted

I really like the direction this was going in, very much the Uncle who works for Nintendo, if you know that game. I was immediately hooked by the concept and you had the style down to a T. However, the story is only so much, because inevitably all your choices lead into the same end. I understand the police ending being one alternative, but for it to be every alternative feels a little rushed. I would love to see some expansion on the story, more variety in your choices, and more! Great job!

Developer

Thanks! I'm glad seeing these comments. I've tried what you've said in another game of mine without time limits, if you are interested check it out! ComeD

Submitted

Intriguing, but it felt like it was over far too soon... I tried it 4 times, but was unable to change the outcome. 

I like seeing these story-rich games in a jam, but of course, writing is time-consuming.

Developer(+1)

Thanks! Maybe I'll expand it at some time, it's pretty short.

Submitted

Nice intro! I liked the music and the touches of sound. I felt like it ended right when the story was beginning, so I'd love to see it expand in the future.

Developer

Thanks, I appreciate it! I agree, I'd like that too, but I didn't have enough time and I preferred a short story more than nothing...