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A jam submission

ORPHN-1 — A Sci-Fi Horror Deck-Building RPGView project page

A Sci-Fi Horror Role-Playing Game with Deck-Building Gameplay
Submitted by CurseNightGames (@seeminglyjaded) — 19 minutes, 29 seconds before the deadline

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Overall Appearance#163.3083.308
Quality of Writing#183.3083.308
Overall#252.9622.962
Mechanics#282.6922.692
Use of Theme#382.5382.538

Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted(+1)

WOW. You set tone right out the gate with that cover image and brief summation. Reading further, I had a few thoughts:

  • Again, your cover. It's great!
  • I would find a systematic way to have players make cards. Include a PDF template in the back.
  • A little confused how the dice and cards interact? Might need to see a card to figure it out. I figure the cards augment the roll? But I figure you'll probably working on that as I type this haha.
    • Ok, on pg 8 I finally got for the cards. Bump that up so we understand the base mechanic sooner.
    • Also a thought, what if your cards had numbers on them? If you play them for a number for what is currently your Dice Roll, they go back in your deck. But if you play them as an item, they are gone from your deck. So then you give the players an interesting choice... do I play keep this 9 in my deck or use it as a powerful item?
  • I wish there was a bit more setting. I can tell I would like this world. For example, what are the monsters?
  • Your Kids Die section is great. Again, your TONE is spot on.

KEEP WORKING ON THIS ONE. It is gonna be really good.

Submitted(+1)

The cover image is fantastic. It's instantly evocative of bleak, 70s 80s sci-fi, tonally just right for the game, and this carries through in your font choice for the rest of the document. You undertook an ambitious task for the jam, as a deckbuilding game needs a deck, and obviously you ran out of time. Are you planning on developing this further?

Developer

Thank you. I hope to get a playable version out sometime soon, as well as a revised set of rules and lots of graphical elements to illustrate progress trackers.  Right now I'm toying with the idea of adding  card costs and some sort of energy points system to balance out the cards and add more considerations for gameplay (which could slow down players' turns, but I'm pretty confident in how I can ameliorate this through familiarity with/repetition of cards and clear graphic design). I may put out a version on Tabletop Simulator since I think that would be the easiest way to playtest over the internet. 

That's all going to have to take a backseat to my current project, a book/bestiary on a monster A.I. system I developed. But I'm basically working on the two simultaneously so hopefully ORPHN-1 v 0.2 won't take long to develop. 

Submitted

I can't seem to search in the document for some reason. or select any text.

Developer

I'm sorry for the inconvenience, something went wrong with Scribus as I exported to PDF. I'll fix it when I go back to revise the document.

Submitted(+1)

The art really gives me some 2001: Space Odyssey vibes. Also the phases seem a little bit like a game of Fiasco. Don't know how well would this system work but it has a potential. Really cool.

Developer (1 edit)

Thank you. Its systems are an experiment in making deterministic systems that convey clear information and encourage cooperative gameplay. It takes the conflict resolution mechanism away from the binary die roll of "I can/can't do the thing this turn" to "we can do it in x turns if we work together." 

Submitted(+1)

I really like the setting, and the mechanics look interesting although I'm not sure how well they would work. I'd like to say I would try playing it if the rules were complete but I can't guarantee I'd have the time.

Developer

It's okay, I think reading RPG books is just as valuable sometimes as playing them. Thank you for the feedback and for reading ORPHN-1.

Submitted

Did you draw the cover youself?

Developer

I found it on a website with public domain artwork. This is an artist's rendition of what a solar eclipse looks like from the moon. https://publicdomainreview.org/collections/photographs-of-models-of-the-moon-187...