Very interesting and creative entry. Great descriptions and enough to go on to inspire a creative story. Music & ambience are well-chosen and help to build atmosphere.

I do feel that the rulebook (on the itch.io page) has some graphical effects that make it rather hard on the eyes, a sort of chromatic aberration. I wouldn't use that on text.

Love the use of the restriction, and the overall feel. I have to admit, I didn’t do the journaling part – don’t quite have the energy right now – but I love the concept. Also very fond the auguries – the descriptions of the skies are beautiful. The music was eerie and effective – gave the game almost a sense of menace, or at least of strange powers at work :)

The first narrative-based game I've seen this jam and great use of the restriction.