This is excellent. The art style is on point and feels consistent throughout. I enjoy the timeline and how that drives the adventure development as well, but feels pretty natural. I'd definitely play or run this!

I want to play this to discover what would happen if an adventurer smoked the Bath Salts of Travelling.  Is it considered bathing my character does it naked??

There is a lot to do and a lot to explore, great adventure. Love the idea of the ziggurat that bursts from the ground. Awesome tables

Front cover illustration is lovely and I really enjoyed the magic items.

Love that pointcrawl on the title page! Great map. excellent layout. I love a bathing chart 😏😄

The map on the cover is not only a great illustration but also very legible for use in a game.

I liked the commitment to one theme throughout the booklet. Many of the Magic Items and Treasures are really interesting, I especially liked the Blackhand Staff and the Vanishing Pipe.

I would have preferred if the Lava Tubes and the Ravenous Temple used two different letters, such as "L" and "R" instead of sharing "A". If I ran this scenario, rather than progressing in the presented day order, I would roll a d12 on the Timekeeping table, saving the final 2 events for last.

So much adventure in 8 pages! I'm envious!

Great job. I love the map cover. And such concise writing. It could be a little tedious to find information, but most of the adventure follows from the last so there shouldn't much backtracking.

incredible amount of content in 8 pages, and doesn't feel cramped! I love the magic items