Fun little choose your own adventure story. I didn't like the instant game over choices, especially being one of the first choice.

I see you're planning on doing some updated CSS work, and I agree. I think a better design would make it feel like more fun of a game.

I do agree with someone else about the cover photo being incongruous with the game. I think being more honest upfront would've set my expectations better for the actual gameplay.

Bummer you used AI imagery. I'll be honest, it's a disingenuous and unprofessional look. I have tons more respect for someone just dabbling in art trying their best to create some art than for someone using image generation, I hope next time you try and do something on your own. It's much more fulfilling, too

Interactive fiction games are really cool. I would advise against using AI pictures, it makes it look a lot less professional. 

I wanted more money and got insta gameover, but I played a second time through and won.

Here are some of the things I jotted down, obvious I know you didn't have a ton of time.

• I didn't really like being what looks like AI art baited into the game and then that game art not matching up
• The game UI needs some love. Small things would go a long way. Such as better using screen space given the bulk of the game is going to be text.
• If you're using Godot, I suggest looking at a plugin called Dialogic. You'll be able to make these choice based dialogs look very nice.

Best of luck creating more games in the future.

The game executes theme and special feature well, altrough there's no much in it, we had a few minutes of fun playing the game. However, the game does not have any sfx and music. Really excited to see next updates, keep it up!

~ jog1t

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